I realized after posting my original concept version that I had forgotten to activate a background layer of distressed, splattered music sheets. So, that is now turned on and you can see it running in the background now. I took the advice about the green lights and brought them forward a layer and enhanced their green, vivid color more. I extended the lights to reach the full page length too. I think it fits better than stopping mid-way. The girl didn't really blend well in my concept art and so I ran her through a soft, warming action to blend her better into the scene. She's not quite sticking out like a sore thumb any longer. I also fixed a boo-boo on her lip area that I "thought" was a smear on my screen! Turns out it wasn't and my color range selection deleted part of her lip area in my original. I also did an inner shadow/gradient work on the logo as I didn't quite like it standing out off the page either. I think this final version is much richer and more vibrant. Still has that bright, funky "dance club" feel to it that I just love. Very happy with this final version.
For ease of comparison, here is the original version.
Broken CD. Digital image. Duplication Centre. N.p., n.d. Web. 31 May 2014.
Ematil_1023. Backlit Microphone. Digital image. Free Images. N.p., 8 Nov. 2013. Web. 31 May 2014.
Green Laser Light Show. Digital image. Casa Laser Lights. N.p., n.d. Web. 3 May 2014.
Ilkaysan. Curtain 2. Digital image. Free Images. N.p., 22 Nov. 2009. Web. 31 May 2014.
Royalshot. Woman with Headphones. Digital image. Free Images. N.p., 18 June 2010. Web. 31 May 2014.
Wandrei. Abstracto Musical. Digital image. Free Images. N.p., n.d. Web. 31 May 2014.
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